Just a page to dump my notes
Out of time to feel like dope
To shut the crap out of my head
To make the voices alluded
To run away, to feel alright
To chop the pieces out at night
To call the blood red rivers dry
To make your future children cry
Descending
Condescending
My loli licks of flippy flips
Of calling call on overalls
Pretty preps and tripped out threats
Phoning cards of Captain Picard
Just beam me up, Scotty...
Wait a second...
Tonight, its about dumping myself
Breaking up without myself
Shutting up the voices I hate
Of calling myself on my own hate
Wait...
What?
Please shut up
Author notes
Look, I'm just trying to be stupid, alright? I think its more creative than acting like there's any intellect to the same thirty thousand rhymes that every poet has already put pen on paper to. Its not meant to be the smart way out, its just meant to be fun.
Sacrifice your Critiques unto me:
Comments
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This was definitely interesting. I rather enjoyed it though. Great work. Very fun. Best of luck to you in all things!
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Yep, it's fun!
Esp loved this-
Tonight, its about dumping myself
Breaking up without myself
Shutting up the voices I hate
Of calling myself on my own hate
Though every word, every phrase, every idea has probably been reused for about a gazillion times, the difference is that it's written by you and not someone else. And yep, that's all the difference there is.
So, yeah, call me a cliche, but I love words! Haha
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