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Dead

              I saw my girlfriend and I knew it was too late
              I said to myself sartistically 'oh great'
              I told everyone she was dead
              I really really did regret.
              Why haven't I knew that she was sick
              Now that she died i'ts to late
              Well there's nothing to do so I
              Carried her to the front gate.
              But then  actually my girlfreind Joyce
              Was just sleeping, she only just woke up
              And I rejoiced
               

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 13, 2008
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    What a scare you had!!


  • hks
    October 13, 2008
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    LOL

    amazing.

    much love,
    oldschool


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    October 12, 2008
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    i was starting to think... "oh god hes gonna f**k her when shes dead." lmao shows how sick i am.


  • The Fun House silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This started out so sad but you turned it around to be a happy thing. Well done. I do hope this didn't really happen, it would be scarey. Well done.