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Shattered Alive-Acrostic Poem

 

 

So much heartache dances upon my soul

How much longer do I have to wear this mask?

Another day that you are on my mind as I

Try so hard to forget the years that we've shared

Time is the only one that can clear this slate in my mind

Each day I go out and try to find tranquility

Reaching out to Heaven I say a humble prayer hoping

Endlessly that you are safe and sound wherever you are

Day after day, I struggle to find the air that I need to breathe

 

Alive but, only through the excruciating pain I feel

Let me be so that I can find a way to mend my heart

I have waited far too long and I don't deserve to feel this way

Very much in love is where I wish to find myself in this world

Edge of my sanity is where I hold on hoping to one day be free

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Excellent acrostic!! Truly enjoyed this creative work!! Thanks so much for entering my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.


  • whitexrose39
    October 18, 2008
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    I really connect with this poem. I can feel the pain.

    Good Luck in the Contest!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    Wicked idea Such powerful emotions here, great take on the prompt, good luck


  • A63-Angel
    October 12, 2008
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    lovely imagery and a beautiful piece. good luck in contest!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    WOW! You really penned this acrostic! I enjoyed this and I really liked hoe you did ALIVE Good luck in the contest!

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