Come on just take a look
Is it something you can see
I hide quite well
Can you find me
I believe so
Though I've tried so hard
To find my own place
To keep myself apart
You must look closely
To find where I am
I know it is hard
But I know that you can
Just look deep inside
Though it's hard to believe
If you look close enough
You just might see me.
A contest entry
- My first contest! Picture Prompt by Itzamna.
600 points, ended October 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I always feels this way too...this is very reflective...I am a very timid person and I always hide but hoping someone might find me, a sort of discovery not in the physical sense...like the way you said it, if you look close enough
I think I've said enough, before I talk nonsense...I just want you to know that this is great.
Anna Lee
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Good luck with this! To me this is a winner. Nice expressive work of poetry! THANKS!!!
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