He caught us both in action;
and showed his wild reaction.
He laid us down and had us.
Oh my, the SATISFACTION!
Author notes
Credit or discredit of the idea goes to my naughty girlfriend.
A contest entry
- !!!!!QUICKIE!!!!!!! by cre8tiv-writer.
1000 points, ended October 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An Open Invitation.....What do you think?
Comments
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short. sweet. a satisfying piece. of poetry.
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Oh my, this is wonderful and arouses the fantasy of the reader as well as your girlfriend. A very satisfying poem, so to speak.
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Bruce
My girlfriend's fantasy is not arouses so easily. She needs a practical demonstration.
Thanks for the comment!
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this is very interesting. I like it.
keep it up!
CrimsonViper -
Short and sweet and to the point! Just how I like it. This really gets the imagination going and I can imagine everything that may be going on behind the words. Very sexy and naughty.
-Garrett
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i think i need to go have a cold shower cause of the idea that just went in my head, keep it flowing,*points to head* very very naughty idea swim in there right now
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Disturbed Prodigy
Did you call me naughty? Now I'd have to prove it.
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Very sexy. It was short but you got Your girlfriends fantasy out. You write very well.
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nonsexeynerd
Who's very sexy? He, she or I?
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I liked how this one was short and sweet yet holds so much information at the same time
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Darkrainshadow
I think I should apply for a degree in info-tech.
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this is very hot and sensual, I like how its all laid out
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Something to imagine would be verra satisfactory. hot and sensual.
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Leonura
Could be more satisfactory with you as the fourth character....
I missed you, honey! You should have been there.
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clever and oh! my the satisfaction...you sure know how to get to the point of a matter...very sweet
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PurrinKitten
Yea..I know how to satisfy myself....
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This is so clever!!!!!
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mcfreeman
Clever on whose part...
his
her
or my?
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Wahayyy awsome *claps*
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Ingridfalls
*kisses your palms*
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short sweet and right to the point. does it get much better than that. you really show how sometimes when writing about subjects such as these less is more because it leaves the imagination plenty of room to fill in the rest.
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Nymph-Angel
Your 'plenty of room' reminds me the 'spacious office table'... -
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lol. not a bad point.
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Nymph-Angel
How about making the most of the table...
The boss is not around...
just you and me?
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...OMFGGG
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UnHoLy-VeNgEaNcE
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no its just so so so good!!! :))
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nice and sweet love it
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tanika
Thanks honey!
Kisses!
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This was really sexy...but the rule is 10 lines sweetness.....
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Sexy luv. This might be a quickie, but my body still throbs
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VampireSeductress
I'd love to see your body throbbing til you reach the level of satisfaction, my love!
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Ah ha, hot hot HOT. then again, its the usual from you.
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Just Anotherldoit
Thank you for your hot comment, hottie!
Lots of kisses!
Galaxy2
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Awesome
even though it's not your fantasy, It's an awesome poem!!
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FallenAngel86
You're sweet, honey!
Kisses....all over!
Galaxy2
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Whoa!
Now you got our male attentions! haha... Not just a girls fantasy
Best wishes in this contest. WOW!
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dillpickle6
Thanks.
Not my fantasy.
Can't control other's fantasies.
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