i try so hard to hold the tears,
i put forth the effort to smile
when on the inside i die.
beat-beat beat-beat
my insides burn,
my lung feel full of liquid
think of the pain, the hurt
beat-beat beat-beat
my mind goes mute
my thoughts all stop
with out thought i feel no pain
beat-beat beat-beat
the flood of pain stopped
i fail to realize
my fatal bruise, my bleeding soul
beat-beat beat-beat
i bleed to death
my soul extinguished
my heart starts to fail
beat-beat stop
A contest entry
- All I Have/no trophy winners please. by piccola.
600 points, ended October 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such a sad write but I know how you feel. The end is great, thank you for entering
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its ok, let them out, every thing will be fine in the end, youll see!!!
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I loved the reaccurring last line. It forshadowed the end wonderfully. I loved the imagery and flow to this. Great job!
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