Kaleidoscope dreams unfold
floating gently into soft sighs
as heartbeats string across pearly clouds
dipping into effervescent seas
across miles of horizon,
adorned with clandestine memories
I feel you…
with every sunset
in heartfelt smiles of yesterday
missing the sun upon my face
I linger slowly,
with stars guiding my eyes
onto imprints left
swirling with the tides;
reflecting the clarity lost
of all your love
truly was
tender flickers of hope,
opening my heart to breathe
once again~
Author notes
Picture or quote:“Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart”
~Kahlil Gibran
A contest entry
- Beauty..........Quote or pic inspired Quickie by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 13, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderful interpretation of the prompt ... loving the gentleness of this write... congrats on the HM...
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Thank you so very much Rob for always leaving such wonderful comments on my poems!!!
Linda
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" feel you…
with every sunset
in heartfelt smiles of yesterday "
I fell in love with that part,
it is so beautiful.
I enjoyed the whole piece, pure beauty
in each word.
Justgot2loveme
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Thank you so very much Olivia for the lovely and so beautiful compliment my friend! I am so happy you enjoyed this one!
Thank you
Linda
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A dance of wave in splashing beauty, rolling soul on pillowed foam seeking shore in glittered season...beautiful indeed Jazzy
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OH Rich, as always your tender words bring sunshine into my heart!
Thank you so very much for such a beautiful comment!!
Jazzy
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This is beautiful
I started to choose favorite lines but gave up...I just adore it all...
The imagery is so vivid that I can see you gazing into that horizon and I sigh at the end knowing you are remembering to breathe..
This is amazing ....
Lynda
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Thank you my dearest friend, for you lovely words and for the wonderful trophy! You always hold such inspiring contests how can one resist!!
Thank you
Jazzy
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This is masterpiece of your own. This is... poetry, what I call. Perfect my dear friend. Perfect!
~S~
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Hi Sonja, thank you so very much for this beautiful comment. You are always so dear to me and always bring me a smile with your friendship!! Thank you
Linda
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