Nail polish && eyeliner baby
[the brighter the better]
Paint yourself up dollface
[accentuate && highlight]
It’s a beautiful day
But the sun is going down.down.down
[It’s nowhere near nighttime]
You just showed it up with your smile
[the garish sun…]
Run rabbit, run!
Don’t let them catch sight of you
[Your smile will knock them off their silly feet.]
Author notes
Written 12.10.08
By CatSlash
I know it's not a picture prompt, but I couldn't resist! It's a lovely photo sweets, show your smile and be happy. xx =]
A contest entry
- [Cheer me up (again) ] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 25, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, this is amazing
I really love it
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Very nice write. Cute, but still very Dirty Pretty, if that makes any sense whatsoever. I loved the lines "Nail polish && eyeliner baby" and "but the sun is going down.down.down."
I wish you used a little more variety in your punctuation, but it's okay the way it is. Nice job -
btw, the border is adorable! & thanks for the compliments on my pic
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So glad you like it! I hoped you wouldn't find it creepy or anything =P Enjoy!
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lol
nope, it's not creepy at all
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aw, I LOVE this. It's so cute and sweet and it really made me smile. I love the inspirational tone in it. This is amazing. I'm so glad you entered
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