Dead to her will,
She was carried on through a room,
She couldn't stop the man for she had no weapon nor a broom.
She was probably unconscious and was oblivious to her taker,
She was probably protecting her household,
But seems she was overtaken.
The man was her husband who helped her from her fall,
She'd fallen in the kitchen high as she reached for something tall,
She fell down hard as aftrwards he'd helped,
To take her upstairs where she recovered and had slept.
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1000 points, ended October 13, 2008, 15 entries
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interesting
Hey i was expecting something creepy...that was good though. =]] -
Very good...the flow was really awesome!!!
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