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Party Pooped

I want to party tonight
she held her glass high
he takes one look and knows
the end of her night was near
sadly, she couldn't hold liquor
and just then she collasped
into his loving and caring arms
he repeated his apology to her
but he had to work tonight
then he laid her gently down.

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