She stands knowing he watches
softness flows around
his sweet angel
in morning light.
Freshness fills the room
line dried sheets and vanilla coffee.
A scent familiar of everyday life.
Pretending sleep
remembering the night before
his hands had wrapped around those contours.
Pulling her down,watching her beautiful face
in full orgasm.
Lowering her sheet
exposing milky flesh
her back to him,
smile across her face.
Reminiscent, two sweaty lovers
like animals
touching clawing each other.
Like it was their first time
his hands magic,taking her mind
to no where and everywhere.
Mischief controls her thoughts
as cloth falls to the floor.
His hand reaches out
she falls into bed...in love again.
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A contest entry
- Adult Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1100 points, ended October 12, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 112 entries
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Comments
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This is REALLY good. Great motion an a life of it's own.
You've forgotten to space out the commas in two lines though.
"Pulling her down,watching her beautiful face"
"his hands magic,taking her mind"
Nicely written!:-)
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this is a beautiful portrayal of love and sex. i love it. i dont know if anyone could describe that as well as you did. i felt like that was everything i went through during my first time. i really like the last line "she falls into bed...in love again" thats how it is everytime isnt it? great write
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This is everything it sets out to be... Perfect!!! Very well done!!!
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this was a beautiful write. i loved it.
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Hey... this is really good! I'm always surprised when I find stuff like this. I want to learn to write it soft, and this is perfectly soft.
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A sensual Sensation for sure.
Definately curl up and sigh poetry here.
Brilliant.
Delila
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silky and sentual
stopped by to see what you have been working on. So glad I did! this is so well written. almost made me blush you painted the imagry so well. softly suductive. I really like it. Nic
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Truly a delight to all the senses, and such subtle portrayal of lovers in their throws of passion. It makes me hungry for physical delights.
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Awesome. HOT HOT HOT! Love the imagery in this sexy poem! Way to go! I thank you for entering my humble contest. It's always a pleasure to read a favorite's work
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i don't think i can say anything else about this poem that other people havn't said already... quite amazing. wow:]
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Beautifully tempting and yes sensual, but not pornographic or smutty, but quite beautifully put.
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is it hot in here or is it just me?
Weeeeeeewh, Amazing Write and I can vision the picture behind the piece. Just like others have mentioned here, I am seeing your amusement flipping its wings again and returning and strong as ever.
My faves lines
Lowering her sheet
exposing milky flesh
her back to him,
smile across her face.
Good job, beautifully penned....
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I see your muse is back! This is wonderful, full of sensual passion and love. I love the familiarality of everyday scents, I could smell the sheets, the coffee and also it tells, this isn't a new love.
Wonderfully written Lisa, thank you for sharing.
love
Michelle
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I loved this! Very sensual. A beautiful piece. Brilliantly penned. Good luck to you in the contest.
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this is beautiful, sensual and full of love.. such a perfect combination.. ahh to feel this is wonderful.. I love this piece that you've penned. written from the heart.
good luck
kat
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Ohhh... You made me think of something. There are those times when it feels like, "I've never done this before?" So wonderful and tender, with just enough fire.
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Beautiful!! Playful as well as tender!
A wonderful sensual write!
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Oh, this sounds so irresistible I love the playfulness as well as the heat, exactly the right combination in my book. Really well done, best of luck, jin
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I LIKE IT MUCHLY!
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well done here. enjoyed this piece.
best wishes honey ii the contest.
Love
Passions
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w00t!
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w00t!
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