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Needy


I just wanted a family,
does that make me greedy?
I just wanted some love,
does that make me needy?

Maybe I’m not deserving,
I just don’t fit the part.
Maybe I’m not entitled,
to any piece of their heart.

I thought all this time,
that my blood was the key.
But all that it’s good for
is bringing pain to me.

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  • Duckie33
    May 12
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    another good one


  • Lowell Poe
    October 16, 2008

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    Nice steady pace and a deep texture of meaning.
    All our expectations...
    when they are far from us ..
    we wonder if we are worthy...
    When we posses what we want
    it just goes in the bin...
    taken for granted.
    The center stanza was touching and written exceptionally beautiful.
    So many dreams that don't come true...
    So many that do.......
    We must pick and choose what happiness we want to keep close
    from life, right up till this very day.
    It is when you are distracted,
    not prepared,
    that all your dreams come true.
    Such a fine writer...
    so happy to have you take time to comment on my work.