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Can't Write

As I sit
in bed tonight,
I wonder why
I can’t write.

The brainstorming
is just abuse.
I think that I
have lost my muse.

I just can’t write
what’s not in my heart.
I can’t write about rainbows.
I’m just not that smart.

I don’t write about politics
or torrid affairs.
I can’t write about turtles
and teddy bears.

I can’t write about suicide
or cutting my skin.
I guess I do my cutting
with my old ink pen.

I was just bored out of my mind.

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  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    LOL, I know exactally how you feel! I hate it when I have ideas in my head but just can't seem to find the words to put them on paper. Great write, even when you couldn't, LOL!
    JHugs!
    Cayla


  • darlintlc silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    I'm glad you were bored! I thought this was so open...so truthful. We all feel this way at times! I believe you write what you feel and if it's something you don't share in your life it's hard to come up with something(like for a contest)just to write. That's why I like the kind of contest that everyone can get something different from...if not I just write what I know!

    Don't give up just wait...it will come to you when you have something to say!!

    darlintlc
    by the way your rhyming was way good!!