Blackest night and shaded hour,
The time has come for you,
Wooden and upgraded,
the time has come unscrewed
Black is night when we all fall,
Grey is the night at rest,
And though that you are made of wood
I'll only know your best
A contest entry
- Gimme 30 Brilliant Words Picture Prompt by Paloszoo.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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knock on wood
this is amazing in its' short sweetness and how you manage to prop this powerhouse in such a small package way to go the heavens are hung in black.. great write
~teddybare~
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This is a wonderfully written piece. Excellent choice of words with perfect placement. Unfortunately you went over the 30 word limit :-( Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!
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Very deep and dark my friend!
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