In the morning
When all your high-classed friends
Have left for better party scenes
You know who will be
Picking you up
Dusting you off
Carrying you back home
Yet, you always treat him
Like he's not worthy
To even grace your presence
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended October 13, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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hey nice work.it kinda reminds me of me except im not a boy and it's my friends who do it. i see it almost every day in grade 7 life though. a girl falls in love with a boy. she wants to be popular.the bring her it then throw her out.
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VERY good job!!! You were able to tell a very good story in these short lines!!! I see this situation all too often!!
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