I had too much to drink
now I can not open my eyes even to blink
Honey I will carry you
do not worry I will not hurt you
oh no I feel dizzy in my head
Honey I got you and it is time for bed
but will you make it upstairs with me
Honey now trust me.
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended October 13, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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makes you wonder what kind of a night that was.
keep up the good work
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Party for two
Oh the mind fills with imagery, wondering what happens next, sounds exciting...lol! But at the same time it could be nerve racking for one party, a nice write.
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Sounds like a night out with me...LOL!! Great job with this!!
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