Lost as a child,
feeling the ripples of a love in flight.
Lost to this world this child never smiles,
And lives alone within her mind .
She dances on the edge of heavens realm,
visions of dark and light.
Little girl in black lost, lived only for him,
and his deep brown eyes.
Once she was a princess,
laughter was heard by all.
He used her and left her with a jest,
and heartache came to call.
Lost is the beauty,
eyes dead to love.
Pushes away those who can see beyond,
turns life off for it's never enough.
Wings torn her mind slowely dies,
and her liguides leave in torents from her eyes.
She silently dies not a whisper heard,
not even his name on her lips her last word.
Author notes
CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLABY
If only they would believe the heart holds enough for many loves whould there be need the heart stays whole its the mind that wont let them go to find the love that brings us back to the light and joy we once so loved
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Hope Angel.
455 points, ended November 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aw this is very moving and puts a well known concept to another level. Thank you for entering. \♥/
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Aw hun
This poem moved me so much
It tugs on a heart and pulls you deep into your thoughts
as you show how tragic her life is
Best wishes always
Julie x
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wow...you gave justice to the given prompt picture...very sad and very dark...and the emotions are so sincere...God bless dear poet!
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Nice look inside the picture. A very deep and sad poem with a little mystery added to it. Well done.
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wow a brilliant take on the promt your imagery is amazing yet beautifully sad the flow and depth of your poem is wonderful good luck in the contest
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My Goodness! The imagery behind the words are fantastic. It is so sad and heartbreaking in it's beauty. Good Luck in the contest this is definitely a winner. God Bless, Jo-ann
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This is amazing! It is extreamly detailed! Everything just flowes. (I read it 2 times... once just reading it in my head and the other i was kind of singing it) I really love it!!!!
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Wow! Excellent job! I really love this poem to! You did a wonderful job explaining it all, with wonderful details. Such a sad poem it is, but so true with the feelings you feel after your heart is broken by someone you love.
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Wow, it just flows out of you, friend! Such a gift! Such a sad tale..Pulled in by her plight, identifying somewhat. You have us all empathizing with her, at one with her to give her love..What a write!
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