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death by staircase

Spiral staircase what have you done?
she took my lovelife on the run,
now she's dead and you're the reason
must hide her body -it's not amusing.
Yeah she's heavy but it ain't cool
grabbed me a shovel for I am no fool
so go ahead just laugh- I'll cry
deflowered the lady still asking why?
She wore a red dress and gray suede shoes
I'll sit on her grave singing these blues.

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 12, 2008
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    WoW!!! Great rhyme, sad story though!!!