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Shattered Alive


 

She is the soother, the healer, the love

felt within the soul of her menagerie,

as she helps make each wounded life whole.

 

In cascades, she sends her water of life

flowing into that whirlpool of want,

eroding the cracked and angry fissures,

 

quenching the frenzied desert sands,

shattering her own mind into purgatives- 

retching in fear of the unknown, pain of the known.

 

The cesspool below seeks to capture her

in its terrifying undertow of distorted reality.

Who will be there to catch her as she falls?

 

She lives hoping beyond hope there is a light

at the end of the promised rainbow, after all.

 

 

Author notes

Alternate poem titles:
Shattered Alive - Inside the Waterfall
Shattered Alive - Inside the Fractured Waterfall

Image: Water of Life, in Wikimedia Commons, public domain.

Contest image: Shattered-me by Arizen, at Deviant Art: http://ooarizenoo.deviantart.com/art/Shattered-me-18264477

 

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Beautiful poem. I felt as if this was written to me Great job, Love! Thanks so much for entering my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.


  • penman gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a great picture. And so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      Thank you!!! I am glad you like my poem!!!

      And thanks for the kudos! Peace, Cyn


  • arafura gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    Wonderful. The image is great too.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 13, 2008
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      Thank you for the compliment...

      What do you think of the title? I couldn't decide on a title to this poem that I really like... anyway, I appreciate your stopping in to read and leave a thoughtful comment... as always, you are appreciated for all you do!! BTW, I look forward to reading more new work on your pages, so whenever you post a new poem, please let me know!! Thanks again John, and take care xx Cyn

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