Torn away from the happiness deserved
Left weeping; alone amongst the dirt trodden flowers
Breath for her survival; illuminating promises
Only to be torn from her tiny grasp
Forward retrieval implies subtle renewal
Without any remorse
Author notes
Prompt/credit: http://moonchild-ljilja.deviantart.com/art/Lost-in-shadows-95852953
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1000 points, ended October 12, 2008, 9 entries
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A lot of truth in those last two lines! A great piece of depth tinged with darkness here.
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