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Solitaire

Alone, I am, but not for long.
I am the Queen, I will stay strong.
If the King finds me, I'll exit the throng
In this game of Solitaire.

Most of the court has had their backs turned,
And because of this I am concerned.
Why haven't any of them returned?
Swallowed up by the dark; Solitaire.

The little ones are everywhere,
And though they are joyful, I am in despair.
It saddens me that no one will care
About my place in Solitaire.

I still remain, my heart full of dread.
My friends, the same color as me, have all fled,
Find my match quick, a black for my red,
Or I will always be Solitaire.

Author notes

...And yet another bad poem by me! Man, I must not be in a poetic mood at the moment. Oh yeah: Elephant String.

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  • The Green Elf
    November 13, 2008
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    personally
    i liked it

  • Nienna Calmcacil
    October 11, 2008

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    Definitely random =)

    Despair is how you'd spell that, not with an 'i'. But that's all that I saw was in error.

    Great job though! I liked the concept... I love playing Solitaire ^_^