Till yesterday
I felt comfortably and felt as if am not alone
as long as I was streaming in lots of desires and rivers of hopes
I am rather well acquainted with the facts that embraced me all the time
and never cared to act according to my ideas and opinions
Today I am forlorn in this materialistic world
and ship wrecked in the strategies of selfish people
and am lagging behind many in the deeds put forth by the advancement of age
and am getting discoloured with all the fancy of the world
NOW I PROPOSE TO SWIM SWEET to THE OTHER SIDE OF THIS OCEAN
with all the saved vigour and activated energy
Therefore I am in dire need of a group
that sail similarly with the same passion of mine
I need a family of people
who can lead me to the ultimate , desireless world
where the beauty of nature and caress of GOD
only are achieved with oft repeated chants of lord’s name
and assured to take us all ,to the proximity of the hearts of noble persons
where peace and calmness alone will prevail upon all others in force
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Author notes
wish to be a cordial member
A contest entry
- I Am So Lonely... I Need A Family by Angels Whispers.
900 points, ended November 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Welcome
Welcome to my family my beautiful dear friend.
In my family of love and respect, you will always be welcomed, and most importantly, loved and respected.
I send to you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.
Take care,
~Angel-Anne~
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Wonderful
Hello dear friend, it is wonderful to hear from you, and I hope this message greets you with a happy heart.
You have penned here a beautiful poem, a poem that speaks to me, as I can so relate to your written words.
This materialistic world of ours is getting worse, so many greedy people wanting materialistic possessions to bring them happiness, instead of wanting the love of a fellow brother or sister,that is more so treasured that any gem on this earth.
To me, family and friends are my prize possessions,they enrich my life and are more valuable than the finest of gold.
My dear friend, your poem was written extremely well, and I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you, but you did not state what part of my family you would like to be.
If you wish to be included in my growing family as a 'Friend' then I would be honoured to call you 'Friend' and will welcome you with arms opened wide.
Could you please let me know in your author notes what you would prefer, so I know how to include you in my family.
With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.
I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply.
Take care my friend.
~Angel-Anne~ (aka Anne)
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