Help me, I am sick
Sick of all the times you lied
Sick of all the things you said
Take care of me, I am sick
It is the least you could do
You made me so sick
No medicine can help
Mommy, I am sick
Don't you care about me?
Don't you love me?
Consider where I am comming from
Don't lie to me, I am sick
There is a possible remedy
Only you know the ingredient to
Mommy, don't let me stay this way
Fix me, you made me sick
A contest entry
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4075 points, ended October 15, 2008, 36 entries
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Comments
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Good write ! ! ! ! ! thanks for entering my contest ! ! ! ! ! Keep writing ! ! ! ! ! GOOD LUCK!!
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Awwwwwwww!
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AW, SO VERY SAD!!!!
When lost is the caring and love of a parent, the one who always suffers the most is the children. It is the simplest thing that is needed to heal, LOVE!
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so sad.lol. aww, i hope this isnt true for you. thanks for entering and good luck. take care
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Oh goodness, this has got some sadness in it. Calling for the mother to heal and gently make you better is something so beautiful. Everyone seeks remedy and no one has it as much as mothers do. Beautiful sweetheart. I hope this is not you cause if it is you know you can always come and talk to me, that's why I am your AP sister.
Best of luck in the contest.
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