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"Adventure"

It's a crap shoot
feel bad not for I
at least pain
for me does not last
thank-gawd
for long.

Wonderous thought
once a kid said
remember your eggs
Ned.

I'll never forget
always a back up mind.

A half full basket

case.                  (haha)

A crap shoot
some loose and fly
scared of their own
goodbyes.

Feel bad not for I
Still being your
phantom kiss
against an angery mind.

... And

When he walked off the stage
the world blew out.

Wall Street crashed,
world economic's became
never more.

Windows in the heavens opened
for leaping lost minds.

Not mine
walking to
my ...

          Magic Poetic Bus called...

          "Adventure"





Author notes

Yep out there somewhere is one I'll never forget and never be able to replace. But yah know? On my Magic Bus of "Adventure"
There's always another who wants to drive.
Have a good evening you.

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  • Tweedle Dee
    October 13, 2008

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    I loved this it made me feel eccentric (word my grandma has been using all day long) and light headed. which is a good thing - means you made me think better.

    I'm on a carpet ride right now - have to join your bus sometime.

    Love the poem, I really did.
    "When he walked off stage, the world blew out." that is one of the best lines.

    *pst... keep your fingers crossed. The world might NOT go to hell in a handbasket if we cross our fingers.

    Good luck and best of sleep!
    'Dee

  • dillpickle62
    October 12, 2008
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    Thanks

    Thanks to csmmoms2 I dumped the 50/50. Haha...not an experianced gambler with dice.


  • csmmoms2
    October 12, 2008

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    Oops

    What I meant to say was that when you roll the dice it's a crap shoot-you never know what numbers are going to pop.
    The odds are never 50-50!

  • csmmoms2
    October 12, 2008
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    Rollin'