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Cleaning Rain

Listen to the sound of my heart
Speading up by the second
Beating with the thunder
As the rain cleanses my soul

I feel the wind in my hair
As I walk down the road of silence
Smiling as the rain poors
Faster and faster it falls

For all the times I cheated
All the times I lied
I walk alone in the rain
Teaching me how to become a better person

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    aww, a very hopeful ending, i like that. thanks for entering and good luck. take care
    Stephanie ♥