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Kaleidoscope Transformations

Paint brushes alive in pastels,

skimming canvases, creating life.

Inspirations muse struggling

to set beauty free, taking flight.

 

Illusions of silhouetted frames,

breathtaking wings of fantasy,

intertwined in crayoned cocoons.

Delicate balances of nature observe,

a metamorphosis;

as rainbow cyclone's transform into exquisiteness.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    Wow...
    Amazing imagery and metaphor and brilliant use of language....I love where you went with this prompt...
    Excellrnt

    lynda


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is an amazing take on the prompt. Beautiful words, best of luck to you.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Nevel
    October 12, 2008

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    wow..Beautifully done for sure. You have a way with words. It read almost like a song...very smoothly flow you added. Great word----> "metamorphosis". Good luck in the contest


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    Yes, an artist's rendition of colour and your feelings..Always well generally love writes from this perspective and you have done exceedinly well..Imagery, flow, well everything is Magnificent!Bookmarked!