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Madness Behold She Comes

There in the mist she comes
In bright colors
Torn dress
Up to the heaps
She shows a leg
She is Mad
She comes at night 
I`m alone
with phantoms,Devils
and the whore
In my head, she comes to rest
Small hours of darkness
With candles lit
To show the pages of pure genious
I am
A poet with a difference
Mad like hell
Where is it
I forget
Or so I heard
Somewhere to the left
Of Baker street
Down the City
The old Town
Where pubs
Are filled with drunks
Where pretty ladies drink
Sprite wine
That stings of lemonade
Oh me
The poor old fool
The poet of genious fruit
I cut my tomato
And make a mess
With her dictating my next
Senario of crazyness
Write she says
Or else
I am going to leave you in distress
At that she takes a box cutter
What am I
Some carton box
Or a red ribbon
Do have a guess

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  • you are mad also Nick


  • McRae by nature
    December 18, 2008

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    "I am
    A poet with a difference
    Mad like Hell"

    I was compelled to laugh, and then immediately felt ashamed this was a piece of brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing.


    Carrie


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    I think you are a wonderful mad poet my friend
    Thanks for the entry
    Good luck


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    box cutters and kisses. poem is manic Nick but boxcutter is my own personal weapon. who else comes to your door with one in their pocket?