effervescent sensations
linger across lips
join pleasurable moments
tantalizing taste buds
thoughts of tomorrow's
dance in a lovers embrace
seeking unity
indecision and uncertainty
dissipate, leaving only
an aftertaste of bliss
a simple knowing
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Option 7
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- PIF Quickie!!! You Know You Want To!! by Sweet Impatience.
1000 points, ended October 12, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I adore that last line! Isn't that just true of two people who are united in heart!
Beautiful write!
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Beautiful! Soft sensual with lovely metaphor and a wonderful closing line...leaving it open to many interpretation...lovely as always...Best,
mystic
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*wonders what she knows*
C
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All will be revealed in time
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Beautiful job - I had to get up and make myself a drink - it inspired me so... Excellent - best of luck in the contest
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