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PrecipItaion Reprise.

Drip
Drip
Drip
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Wet warm feelings of excitement wasted on the young!

How long since you felt the closeness of anothers beating heart?

Beat
Beat
Beat
B
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Beating only for you and the love you give?

I long for you once more to remember how we walked!
Step
Step
Step
S
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In time to our lovers song.

To feel you close
To have you notice
To touch your lips
To know that we are thinking the same while we walk together in the
Rain
Rain
Rain
R
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On down while life passes by.





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  • Dienush
    October 23, 2008
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    I love how different & thought provoking this is. Thanks for your entry.

    ~Diana