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Through the eyes of Innocence

Missing image
Dilated pupils of amazement,
a heart speeding upon joys highway
filling imaginations with awe.

Magical sites envelope tiny frames,
of innocence, in worlds defined by pallets
of wondrous hues.

Each day an adventure of exploration
as curiosity takes its hold.
Tiny fragments of everlasting beauty,
permeating memories, catapulting enjoyment.
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  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    Congrats on the gold!

    Wow, fab write! To small children so much is an adventure! You captured your theme well! Can see why this took the gold, superb
    So it wasn't just me doubling entries, good, thought I'd done something horribly wrong
    Congrats on the gold


  • Nevel
    October 12, 2008

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    wonderful words! Very preciously----> tiny frames. Great messages also into it. This poem saddens me a little. Good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks
    October 12, 2008

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    How lovely!! The joys of childhood expressed beautifully here!


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    don't you just love the wonderment on a child's face when they discover something new.
    Well done
    Juls


  • princess Jewelcat22
    October 11, 2008
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    You did a wonderful job!! I LOVE IT SIS!!
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