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Innocent times


 
As a child I stand,
At the fence watching,
memories of yesterday.
 
A teddy called purple,
Missing her left eye,
Always my best friend.
 
 Such innocent times,
Of love and laughter,
I sometimes miss.
 
Keeping them close,
The memories,
Like a treasure.

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  • Alyzeh
    October 21, 2008

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    Awww.. how lovely, the poetry..the background..the picture! Amazing feel

    Great work love!

  • ea silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    a teddy bear called Purple - that is childhood innocence in a nutshell. Beautiful use of graphics, too.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    Aww.. how precious. This is a lovely write for the picture!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    ahh the memories of yesterdays, our childhood at times has the most beautiful moments in it. You've penned a beautiful piece. that's beautiful and filled with love and this has touched my heart.

    excellent take on the prompt

    good luck in the contest

    kat