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Something Else

why do you test
my patience?
is it deliberate
to see how strong I am
or is it simply
the way it is?
I wonder about you
you say so much and yet
you're a closed book to me
I can't seem to figure you out
puzzles
mysteries are my speciality
but you
are something else entirely
I can't begin
to understand
if you are never around
I need your presence
your voice
if I am ever to succeed
please
test me no more

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10-10-08

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  • soulsyoungartist87
    October 12, 2008
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    it sound like your talking about me alittle


    • Smores Girl89
      October 14, 2008
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      poems have a way of doing that, but no, it's not about you. glad to hear you relate though. always fun to be an enigma lol


  • soulsyoungartist87
    October 12, 2008
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    i like that it sound like me i lil lol were takling about me