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Boiling Point

all the lies, all the deceit
and all the venom you secrete
like a serpent, disgustingly vile
just screw with my head for a while
why the games, just tell me why
you knew I'd shatter from inside
so no matter what the outside shows
it was your hate that left me cold
and now feeling full of selfish greed
while broken pieces are left to bleed
if you never planned to carry through
all that's left to say, is fuck you too!

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  • Under My Willow
    October 11, 2008

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    Awesomeness. I could feel the emotions swelling as I read on. Really loved the "You knew I'd shatter from the inside."


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2008

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    Geez Vickie, little pissed off are ya? Though I can totally understand. As the saying goes, this too shall pass. Love ya sweetie.


    Storm