Night of enchantment
Having sipped wine
Side by side blissfully
On pillows we recline
Overflowing in desires
Passions we ignite
As we stir the embers
Into sparks of delight
Droplets of inspiration
You knew of my need
As I loved the taste
Of the words you feed
Passionate the feeling
With sensuous flavor
Quenching my thirst
Words of love I savor
As I absorb your words
Within I feel the delight
Its like sweet nectar
Pleasuring my appetite
Author notes
I want to be your lover please?!?
A contest entry
- I Am So Lonely... I Need A Family by Angels Whispers.
900 points, ended November 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GIVE IT TO ME!!!!!
Comments
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A 'Lover' you shall be!
sss Hello sweet soul and blessed be!
Hon, you have penned a most beautiful and very sensual write.
Your words wrapped around my soul,warming it with such tenderness.
Ok , I'll tell the truth...it was very sizzling and I adore it
I see that you are wiccan, ah! yes the only way to be.
I was in the craft many years ago, when life was happy and carefree.
I was called The Whitelighter and I'm still known as that. Lol
The craft brought many years of happiness and good fortune.
Have many books on it and have a few friends still in the craft.
Ok back to your poem.... LOL
Your dedication to me was simply beautiful and very "Yummy" nothing could be better than the touch of another woman.
We are Goddesses and should be treated as such.
And as I mentioned before, I am open minded, and if a Goddess wishes to share her love with me, then so mote it be, for I too have so much love in my heart, that at times I think it will burst!
and would dearly love to share this with you.
As soon as time allows I will begin reading your works, I so look forward in doing this.
You will feel the tenderness of my touch through our words of caring for each other, for we both have hearts of tenderness and so much love to share.
With arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
I'm glad to have you as my Goddess Lover!
"Welcome to my family"
With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.
I send to you much love
and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply!
Take care my precious Goddess, I look forward to many days of love shared with you.
Your Loving Angel Lover,
~Angel-Anne~ (aka Anne)
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Wonderful, & erotic. I love it. I tap me hat to the fair lady.
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wow me
amazing write sissy.....you are talented beyond words and keep me in awe with each poem.....this spoke of such sensuality it sizzled.....its a winner in my eyes
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Sweet and sensual -- hope you find the "family" you want. I loved the relationship between the "words" and "pleasuring" your appetite -- great comparison.
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