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Alone in the Night

Alone in the night
she cries
Cries because him
he lies
Lies so she doesn't find out
he cheats
Cheats because he never loved her
she laughs
Laughs because she always knew

She just wanted him to be happy
even if it had to be with someone else

Alone in the night
she cries

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  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    speachless..
    this is amazing!


  • Gigglez09
    December 26, 2008
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    its beatuiful. words cant express this poem


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 23, 2008
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    This is beautiful!

    I am speechless. I love this.

    Naoto


  • cbsbecm88
    October 14, 2008

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    WOW! this is a wondeful write! its flow is so unique and beautiful! the emotion is so strong and touching!
    thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest!

  • M0chax3
    October 12, 2008

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    Nice~

    It's sorta sad that people would go and cheat on others. It's good to let out a good cry now and then anyways.

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