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Baby Jane

Misunderstood and despised she lies
with growing sighs and manic gaze.
With fear of books she no longer looks at
those faded images of all her yesterdays.

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 11, 2008
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    This last two lines deliver a punch. Thanks for entering.