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Father, May I

Beyond the present
lies the future
under covers thick and heavy.
Although minds
sometimes levy,
no hand will ever lift.

With knowledge,
change is closely behind.

So for today,
and for each to follow,
we have no right
to recourse tomorrow
without the permission
of God.

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  • dame de la riviere
    October 12, 2008

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    Ah and his permission is so simply put in clear rules...with free will to obey or ignore as we choose.


    • plainoljoe
      October 12, 2008
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      dame, we all get little blips of future events. But mainly they are reserved for the receiver. If we reveal them without asking, we are playing God and things blow up in our faces.

      Joe


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    October 11, 2008

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    Knowledge Is a good thing, as for change sometimes I go Into that kicking and screaming sometimes I walk In
    accepting
    Good strong write

    • plainoljoe
      October 11, 2008
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      Deceits, not all knowledge is "good". There are many powerful things I know and have practiced in the past that were nothing short of pure evil. Even today, when I allow myself to get overtly angry, the temptation to use that knowledge if hard to overcome

      Joe