If I had known I'd never hear
your voice again
I'd memorize each thing
you ever said
And on these lonely nights,
I could think of them once more
You were the treasure in
my heart...
Author notes
Love hurts when we
think we have found it...and love hurts when we
know we have lost it.
A contest entry
- Open to you! 20 to 30 words of whatever you wish by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - predator &&& prey. 10 lines or less. by sharptooth.
446 points, ended April 2, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very heartfelt, i actually even enjoy the piece in your author's note. you do a great job of putting those emotions out there in a way many people can relate to,
how does it relate to the predator/prey concept, though? -
Wow, how the soul would be content hearing that, and that means yours Grace. Lovely warmth and affection.
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So emotinal and well written from the heart...love is so many things both good and bad...and hide sight would save us all...nicely done...
thank you for entering!
mystic -
I love this piece. So emotional. This is a very deep poem. You can tell it comes from your heart. Excellent job!
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Well written emotional piece here. Taking the words of the heart and laying them straight, always the best way and makes the best writes. Well done.
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So beautifully written!
This is a wonderful thought that you
have penned for this contest. Good
luck to you and it's great to read you
once again. Take care!
Jeremy0826
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