The smell of his shirt,
The sound of his voice,
The touch of his gentle lips upon mine,
Those cool nights by the lake,
This is what love is.
He,
Is love.
A contest entry
- Open to you! 20 to 30 words of whatever you wish by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A lovely write indeed, expressing a deep and abiding love. Nicely penned.
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Very well written poem indeed.
Really shows a lot of feeling and love.
Good work
Samuel -
Sweet write, but it is 53 words...sorry!
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Oops. My bad, I miscounted sorry! Didn't realize it till afterwards.
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aw, this is so sweet and just all around true. that is what love is, just when everything about a person is what you feel what you want to be around. i love this i feel all butterflyie right now lol thats not even a word but you konw what i mean.
good job
♥; coley
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