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...For Me

Found out the lies
Planned a reply
So now here I am
Alone I stand

You lied again
I'm not surprised
You thought your intentions
Were forever disguised

You just never stop
The lies never cease
So now go away
Just leave me please

You hated one
You cheating one
You lying one
You thought you'd won

Your words no more
I want to hear
For you, I wish
Your greatest fear

The words I want
To use for you
The tone I'd use
Are nothing new

You've heard me mad
You've seen me play
You know how it works
Now go away

You're not wanted
My games are through
You lie, you cheat
I'm done with you!

I'm doin the best I've done
The best I can
And you go with
ANOTHER man?

Once wasn't enough
Twice was just a game
You're at THREE now
And I'm ashamed

Shamed to have you
Shamed to know you
I wash my hands
Today I'll throw you

You're no longer mine
You never were
The pain ends right now
And we end right here

Words can't describe
The way that I feel
My only regret
Is that this is real

Author notes

The second in a series of seven poems that chronicle the process I went through durring this break-up. First was "...For Her". In this one I realize that I shouldn't be sad but rather angray at the woman because of what she did to me.

Tell me what you think. Not sure if it is done yet or not.

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  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    I loved it

    this was great really it was


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    October 22, 2008

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    at some parts it really sounded like doctor suess, which is a complete compliment. I love your rhyming. It is beautiful. the topic itself is sad and I am sorry you dealt with that...
    Rose


  • KillerRain
    October 15, 2008
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    best ive seen from you yet. KillerRain


  • Melodies
    October 11, 2008

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    A deeply felt poem that suggests you are finishing a relationship. So be it, and continue with your poem if you wish, but it seems good and well done to me.