crayola slashes on the wall
another reminder of youth
they are slipping away
I feel the pain of recognition
as I watch them grow before me
spreading their wings
Flying high into the azure sky
I shade my eyes from the light
they have flown into the sun
In a list
A contest entry
- Open to you! 20 to 30 words of whatever you wish by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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This is sweet, at least you take the time to recognize how fast times goes by and treasure every moment!
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This is a truly refelctive and lovely poem thank you so much for sharing


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Why do they have to grow up! I wish they would stay safe and little...such a sweet write of love and truth...well done...
thank you for entering!
mystic -
You did a wonderful job with this write!! I LOVE IT SIS !!!





