theres a look in your eyes today
suggesting you arent here
I try to pull you back to me
But you are to far away
sitting right next to me
A contest entry
- Open to you! 20 to 30 words of whatever you wish by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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HArd feelings to deal with...peopel can be right next to you but really be far away...a lonely feeling...nicely done...
thank you for entering!
mystic -
Good poem! I really like it. I love the way you describe what is going on. Good Luck in the contest!
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