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swirling

&;the colors all blend together
and my lifes swirling apart
cigerettes aren't saving me
energy drinks taste bland
im falling down that deep dark hole

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    No cig's are killing you and energy drinks a false hope...very unquie and creative...interesting write...
    thank you for entering!
    mystic


  • PaintedParisPassion
    October 11, 2008
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    ew
    energy
    drinks
    disgust
    me
    haha im in a weird mood today
    why can't i write like you?!