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The Ring of Truth

Somewhere it's been written
that truth is just a lie
turned inside out.
If so...
in which lie can we believe?

A contest entry

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  • Horrific Hollis
    October 18, 2008

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    Amazing perspective. I love how you suggest new ways of looking at things that are believed to not have any twists and turns in their meaning. Very creative. You seam to have a mind that works in different ways. i really like this poem. ~Hollis

  • copper29
    October 17, 2008
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    Very nice. I love paradoxes and poems that make me think.


  • Lowell Poe
    October 12, 2008
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    DESERVES FIVE STARS


  • Lowell Poe
    October 12, 2008
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    Or what truth?
    Excellent.

    Peace LOWELL POE


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    Creative and thought provoking write...it is food for thought and moments to ponder...well done...
    thank you for entering...
    mystic


  • emc2
    October 11, 2008

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    Much truth is spoken in this poem. Today, we are told several lies, but which one can we believe, if you can even believe any of them. Good job! Good Luck in the contest!


  • rbruce gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    Much food for thought here, which lie can we believe. I don't know, there are so many emanating from the halls of power, each party conflicting with the other. Maybe I shall just watch the grass grow and be sure that what I see is real. Excellent write my poet friend.


  • Rheea gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    At this time in America's short history who could could even know?

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