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Dip Me In Color.

Dip me in color,
each droplet a memory, an event to come.
Let me shine like the sun, with my UV rays burning your heart in lust.
A rose shares its color of magenta in my heart, beating fulling, dripping droplets of paint among the wounds of a heart running out of beats.
Water surrounds my eyes given me a sea foam green, jealousy embracing my mind with your every move.
Rain pours down on my head given me tears of a vibrant blue, each step you take away my body becomes more and more a liquefied mess.
Dip me in your paint bucket, smear my color among your heart,
dip me in the color your mind longs for.

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sorry if this makes no sense and the picture for inspiration is this http://www.area105.com/2d1.html

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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    lovely poem expressing such vivid colors inspired by the pic...TY for entering!

    Lynda


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 12, 2008

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    You incorporated the color beautifully. Passion in this piece. Good luck to you.


    whisper


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    Getting your message, I think..You are in love with color, like myself, especially some colors. It is your strength..It is you, your passion..You are very alive! The energy of your write exudes through the whole write...Excellent and magnificent! Bookmarked!