&sometimes the light outshines the darkness
but its rare for me.
&my hearts sinking and beating so fast
while my hand remains again unheld
I'm all alone in a world so dark and cold.
life has meaning but it seems so pointless,
butterflies and ponies baby, peaches and snails.
peace signs and cigerettes such a cliche,
is this what i've become to the world?
will my light outshine the dark
or will i fall into the hole like alice?
Author notes
candy clouds of lullaby
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Hope Angel.
455 points, ended November 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
I like your take on the prompt, and how you ended it with a question. I really liked the meaning in this. Thanks for entering. \♥/
-
oh em gee
alice in wonderland
i love that
movie!!!
eeeek. This rocks!
Adding your comment:
