Enshrouded in darkness
Rooted in disparity
Seeking self enlightenment
Striving to break free
Self inflicted prisons
Endure eternally
Unless internal conflicts
one day surrender to peace
Author notes
****CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLABY****
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Hope Angel.
455 points, ended November 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a great take on the prompt, I can relate to this more then I can say.
Thank you for entering.
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My pleasure angel.
The picture was very cool! I really enjoyed your contest.
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Aww thanks.
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Your very welcome! Let me know when you have another contest and I will do my best to write one for it.
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Aw I will. Thanks.
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So true! We have to end inner conflicts and self imposed prisons to find peace!
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So true my friend so true!
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very good
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Thanks jane.
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Lovely My Friend
Yes, sometimes we are prisoners to our our thoughts. Breaking free is hard to do sometimes but with faith and hope we eventually get free. Excellent write. Nice imagery! Great take on the lovely picture.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Thanks sandy! I knew you would understand.
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Such a wonderful write. You sure said alot in only 2 stanza's..now that's talent! Best of luck.
Linda
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Thank you very much linda for the kind words.
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