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my sweet you

Free me.
Dance with me.

I see you,
can you see me?

I have held my hands.
Saying to myself,

beyond these boundaries,
is my true being.

Can you see me?
I want to be held.

I long for your touch.
I long for your smell.

I can no longer see you,
for it breaks me.

I now pray,
that we meet again

in mind, spirit and being.
I have faith.

Faith in my love.
I hold my sweet you,

in my arms at night.
And just pray,

that you will be there
by my side.

I love you
and I dont know you.

But in time I will find
my sweet you,

standing with me
and I will be content.

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3. Why do I love you? Because you are, and always have been, my dream

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwwww ^_^
    this is amazingly sweet and wonderful.goodluck