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A Darker Side

Missing image
Solar scarring revealed a torturous journey
while ever concealing
its horrific, darker side.

A contest entry

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  • HaleyMary
    October 11, 2008

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    Beautiful write. It also had a bit of a dark side to it, too. Made me think of like going on a journey of the unknown, not knowing what could be waiting on the other side. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lady Michaella
    October 11, 2008
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    This is, in fact a literally, very dark poem
    Lol, It wasn't a picture prompt about the moon at all, but because this poem is very dark still... Its definitely a great, deep entry. I really enjoyed reading it, it was so good, expressing so much in just 13 words!
    Thanks for entering!
    -RoseDaughter-

  • lustinahandgrenade
    October 11, 2008

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    i like this alot, its really good, especially since its so short but it says alot at the same time, good job