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Rainbow Innuendos.

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Rainbow innuendos
touch carousels of light
panoramic circumstance
paints a fay delight.

Swirls of mere illusion,
canvasses at play
colours of confusion
a sensory bouquet.

Heartbeats painting feelings
emotions, soft, entwined
songbird wings ascending
brush against the mind.

Kaleidoscopic sentience
beauty lives apart
light of true reflection
glows within my heart.




                           

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  • kaibab silver member
    October 13, 2008
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    Warm and wonderful in a cascading strream of rhyme...Lovelythis is


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    I love this...The rhyme and flow is flawless and the alliteration is beautifully present, many times unseen in rhyming poetry...
    Beautiful sentiment added to that makes this amazing in my eyes...

    Lynda


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is beautiful imagery, and your flow and rhyme are perfect. Best of luck to you.


    whisper


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 11, 2008

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    Oh wow..... This is a terrific write and paints the picture so vividly. Awesome job hun, keep up the good writing! You have a devoted reader here.! :]